tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3956602142824296449.post8588656549834644529..comments2024-03-22T18:13:55.958+00:00Comments on Deanna Crisbacher : From Script to Screen: Story Idea #2 with Influence MapDeannahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10573754094233201638noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3956602142824296449.post-61353099173136816332016-01-15T01:33:01.072+00:002016-01-15T01:33:01.072+00:00You really gave it a lot of though, but after read...You really gave it a lot of though, but after reading this I actually have thousands of questions about the story, not the environment. It sounds interesting, don't get me wrong. <br /><br />About the story I wonder how does he/she gets glitched? Also for me it would make sense that the guards are mind-controlled as well. I imagine it as if these chips re-programme the aliens into doing their specific duty in their community. As you say one is farmer, other military and so on and so on. I'm not sure if it's relevant to know where they are being sent to if you are not going to use it in your story. And I like the idea of the aliens being so advanced they are like cyborgs and it would even make sense to be controlled. I mean if it has something that can be programmed it would be easier, wouldn't it?Krissy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17188493125165361583noreply@blogger.com