Wednesday, 18 November 2015

What If? Metropolis - Final Composition?

Taking guidance from feedback on my previous compositions, I altered the floor plane to make it less flat. I like how it looks a lot better, if the city was in a forest I doubt the ground would be perfectly flat anyway. I think from here I'm going to paint over it and make some quick colour compositions before moving onto my final painting.

Before (Top) and After (Bottom)
Change in lighting and a few other tweaks.

1 comment:

  1. compositionally, the top image is strongest, though the foreground element on the right isn't actually very elegant in its own terms - a little tweak to make better use of this element - i.e. to make it more impactful?